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Old 01-10-2020, 08:49 AM #1
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5th Gen Remote Start/Alarm site is live

Just spent a few days putting this site specifically for 5th Gen guys.
2010-2020 Vehicles are covered. Both Push to start and Bladed Key vehicles!!

​Toyota 4runner 5th Generation Remote Start / Alarm Plug and PLay

LMK what you guys think!
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Old 01-10-2020, 11:34 AM #2
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Website looks clean and professional. Iíll push this website to groups whenever they inquire about remote starts/alarms.
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It looks good...but...

On your FAQ page, I would go in and clean up the number of times you have put "i" instead of "I" - when referring to yourself. Not trying to nitpick, but that tends to drop the credibility of the site in my opinion.
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Agreed...proofread. I wouldn't trust my vehicles security to anyone that can't spell.

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did some more edits. thanks for the feedback.
There are so many "i" instead of "I" jeez didnt even realize that.

first time doing a website/eCommerce thing. it takes up so much time!!

keep the feedback coming!
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There are far too many spelling and grammatical errors to list.

The site is confusing and has nonsensical sentences like "I did however a few months prior install a Compustar AS2000 into my Infiniti Q45" and "Your one stop for remote start/alarm for your 5th gen 4runner! 2020's are now covered!" - what does that mean? Are there words missing?

There are plenty of companies that will fix your errors for a reasonable fee.

Oh, and do the Gmail terms of service allow you to use a free account for business?

Aside from "Canadians" being used incorrectly ("Canadians shipping is additional $27 via USPS (usually duty-free))", you want to discuss this with your attorney. What happens when a Canadian customer is charged the fees? The proper sentence would read along the lines of "Shipping to Canada is $27 (US). You may be charged the customary import fees".

If part of your target audience is in Canada, then you need to state that all prices are in USD.

The main site also implies that these are your products, while you are, in fact, a reseller for Compustar. Nothing wrong with being a reseller, but you don't want to give the impression that it is your product.
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There are far too many spelling and grammatical errors to list.

The site is confusing and has nonsensical sentences like "I did however a few months prior install a Compustar AS2000 into my Infiniti Q45" and "Your one stop for remote start/alarm for your 5th gen 4runner! 2020's are now covered!" - what does that mean? Are there words missing?

There are plenty of companies that will fix your errors for a reasonable fee.

Oh, and do the Gmail terms of service allow you to use a free account for business?

Aside from "Canadians" being used incorrectly ("Canadians shipping is additional $27 via USPS (usually duty-free))", you want to discuss this with your attorney. What happens when a Canadian customer is charged the fees? The proper sentence would read along the lines of "Shipping to Canada is $27 (US). You may be charged the customary import fees".

If part of your target audience is in Canada, then you need to state that all prices are in USD.

The main site also implies that these are your products, while you are, in fact, a reseller for Compustar. Nothing wrong with being a reseller, but you don't want to give the impression that it is your product.
thanks for the input, made some more edits!
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